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Learning 2 Bake From Scratch LXXXVI
Garden Strawberry Cake I made it up. Guess the secret ingredient! It’s the layer cake recipe from the back of the Swan’s Down Cake Flour box, which I’m writing down here so that I can throw the box away. Garden Strawberry Cake 2 sticks butter – room temp2 cups sugar3 cups sifted Swan’s Down Cake…
LitRPG and Omniscient Narrator
Research time! My narrator talks. I _think_ this is genre standard, but I need to do some checking on when and where. The fight scenes are all 3rd person. One does not see the fights from our intrepid hero’s perspective. The narrator speaks during fights. This is standard. Bloody but unbowed, our intrepid hero dove…
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I can haz it! I wanted to write down the main points. The two things that I found most important, because they were unalloyed goods, were: What I consider the two most important bits of constructive criticism: And one that I agree exists, but about which I’m not sure I’m going to do anything. I…
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