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I can haz it! I wanted to write down the main points. The two things that I found most important, because they were unalloyed goods, were: What I consider the two most important bits of constructive criticism: And one that I agree exists, but about which I’m not sure I’m going to do anything. I…

G*d and System

Last night I just read. I needed a break. Soloing the System is fun (and it gets better; I found the start off-putting). And here I am awake at 0400, again. A few things filled in while I slept. Chapter 18 may have become tractable. I went through the blog’s emails during first coffee. I…

Flammable Water

This really happened last night. I’ve written it as if it were a scene in the book. I need to find something better to do during my lunch breaks. The menu was basic: Rice, meat, and a vegetable. “Asparagus or Corn?” Mark called out. “Asparagus,” The Laird replied. Mark removed a bundle of asparagus and…