It refuses to gel. I split chapter 19 out of it. That’s an isolated scene that deserves it’s own chapter, even if it is short (five pages; remember when I worried about going over six? now it’s twenty).
Chapter 19 is done. Some info may slide when 18 finally completes, but 19 is stable.
I think 20 is done. I’m pretty sure 21 and 22 are coherent (same topic, chopped in half). 23 is dubious. 24 doesn’t exist, yet (but, despite the renumbering, it is still “Cattle Drive”).
I like the paw print (from chapter 21):
With rotated claws and a slice, I think I’ve got a winner.
I’m writing a LitRPG cozy – starring gay werewolves. It’s weird, but I’m enjoying it.
BTW: Third beer. Time to stop writing – but part of that is my dying keyboard’s fault. The ‘x’ key doesn’t work properly and several others are noticeably high latency. Amazon shipped the new one, today.
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