Words matter, but not every word (I hope). I just spent a minute rewriting this sentence several times: He turned to Frank, who was watching the banter, stunned. Frank is not only “watching” the banter; he’s also hearing it. “observing” would be better. Wait, that means “looking”, too. It doesn’t flow well, either. “watching” itContinue reading “Overthinking”
Category Archives: Writing
Whew! They’re Young!
I’ve been having all sorts of debates with myself about political things, criminal justice, etc… All the things that go horribly sideways after an apocalypse. I just noticed something about my characters’ backstories: They’re all young. This is by-design. It’s also the case in almost all action stories for the same reason I chose it:Continue reading “Whew! They’re Young!”
Who Are These People?
My ensemble cast is growing. I swear I outlined backstories for our four intrepid high school age werewolves (nee football players – an idea stolen from Fire From the Sky and every Army recruiter in the last century). I couldn’t remember who came from where and had what. “Open that backstory file,” I thought toContinue reading “Who Are These People?”
So That’s Why: Economics
I just smashed into a barrier far worse than the magic one, which I could smash with handwavium. I now realize that this is why so many LitRPG books either ditch Earth or rebuild it. I’m writing it as post-apocalypse. The same people are still around in the same places – except the dead ones,Continue reading “So That’s Why: Economics”
Version Control?
I was just switching branches at work and the question occurred to me: Should my book be under version control? I have gogs setup inside my VM cluster. I could map a mount point across the host/guest boundary. I haven’t needed it, yet, but that’s the sort of thing one wants setup before one needsContinue reading “Version Control?”
Font Search 2
Told you. For whatever reason, I woke up an hour early. Some WhatFontIs searching during first-coffee… Site info: I’m starting with a “condensed serif” search. This post is to keep track of the names. At page 10, they started being sans. The Headline category: At page 10, again. We live in an age of sans-serif.Continue reading “Font Search 2”
Font Search 1
I’m sure there will be a “2” so I might as well number the first one. I’m a little too hyped up from Riverdance to go to bed. Why not search for fonts? That’s sleep inducing. How do you know you’re old? “AI” doesn’t pop into your head as the first option for problems suchContinue reading “Font Search 1”
Riverdance
Awesome! Exactly my kind of show: Spectacle, music, humans doing impossible coordinated stuff, and a quiet audience. I’d never seen step-dancing live before. Video doesn’t do it justice. The set was great. I had no idea that The Monument had that nice of a projection/video system. It looked great. There were some small bandstand thingsContinue reading “Riverdance”
Cover Style 2
Over lunch, I was on Amazon for another reason. As usual, I was presented with a “You Might Like This” list. I print-screened four sets of four covers. In each set, I put my tentative cover over one that I didn’t want to be grouped with. I definitely need a different title font. The bookContinue reading “Cover Style 2”
Hardcopy!
First the good news: I “finished” to the logical/plot halfway point. I put it all together. I used the “master document” thing so it’s not copy/paste. 15 chapters. 67K words. 162 pages. That is indeed half a novel. Huzzah! The bad news: I suck. There is markup on almost every other page. At least forContinue reading “Hardcopy!”
Marked Up 